You're time will come

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    You're time will come
    raprite says (30 Jan '13)

    “You’re time will come”

    She was the one
    Gold hair they called blonde
    Looked at me once
    At once I was gone
    She showed me love
    That I’ve never known
    She said I was too young
    Someday I’d know
    Said just you wait boy
    Your time will come

    Now all through these years
    I’ve never healed
    She was the one
    If I’m keeping it real
    I see her always
    Can’t help how I feel
    I know it now
    I knew it back then
    Waiting I’m waiting
    My time hasn’t come

    All of these women
    But she’s still in my dreams
    Can’t shake this feeling
    She’s waiting for me
    Waiting and waiting
    But somehow it seems
    No matter how long
    That time is just gone
    Boy you need to move on
    Admit to yourself
    Your time has come
    Just you look boy
    Your time has come

    Brian McFarland
    RapRite 1/2013

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Submitted by raprite
on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 10:13pm

“You’re time will come”

She was the one
Gold hair they called blonde
Looked at me once
At once I was gone
She showed me love
That I’ve never known
She said I was too young
Someday I’d know
Said just you wait boy
Your time will come

Now all through these years
I’ve never healed
She was the one
If I’m keeping it real
I see her always
Can’t help how I feel
I know it now
I knew it back then
Waiting I’m waiting
My time hasn’t come

All of these women
But she’s still in my dreams
Can’t shake this feeling
She’s waiting for me
Waiting and waiting
But somehow it seems
No matter how long
That time is just gone
Boy you need to move on
Admit to yourself
Your time has come
Just you look boy
Your time has come

Brian McFarland
RapRite 1/2013

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bluesuedeshoe's picture

Fri, 02/01/2013 - 10:38pm — bluesuedeshoe

Hmmm, pretty good if you reverse the she and he as well.....another great one.

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Fri, 02/01/2013 - 10:32pm — rjl1969

You have got to do something with these, I'm telling ya Brian!

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Fri, 02/01/2013 - 10:54pm — raprite

I,m going to post another one I wrote almost exactly a year ago. I really thought my style had changed some, but re visiting this song it doesn't seem to have. tell me what you think. Thanks

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Thu, 01/31/2013 - 5:28pm — rocksavedmysoul

this is my favorite---great lyrics---love it!

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Wed, 01/30/2013 - 10:48pm — Montana Anna

Another fantastic one, Raprite!!!

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Wed, 01/30/2013 - 10:27pm — bluesuedeshoe

Brian, I am so dying to hear the melody and how you project and interpret the "music" you hear with your stunning lyrics. Anything out there on video? By anyone? Link me.

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Wed, 01/30/2013 - 10:47pm — raprite

I'm in Memphis now re grouping. Gonna set up a studio and start mixing some of these songs. Shouldn't be too long before you hear some melodies. I can't describe how it just pops in my head, it just does. Thanks as always.

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Thu, 01/31/2013 - 5:26pm — Duke'sHilltopHo...

Sounds Good! I hear ya when you say it "just comes" that's inspiration. Good stuff. I got some pipes and people always love to hear me sing. Once in LV I was crossing over from Cosmo on the walkway and there was a couple of guys struglin cuz one could play guitar but the other couldn't sing. I dropped a $20 in the bucket and asked if I could hit the mic. When my voice hit the air everyone stopped to look. Never had heard my own voice amplified before it was a rush. Workin for my daily bread right now but when I get up I would love to come and jam with you. Maybe record something real. Peace! Hey Young man .....you gotta dig down deep in your soul!!!

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Thu, 01/31/2013 - 4:15pm — MsBehavin

Like Blue :-) I too--can't wait to hear the music You come up with!!!!! :-)
I have these melodies in my head for lyrics as well--need to learn how to play an instrument (besides the meat-flute--lmao :-) to be able to put the notes on paper. I just sing--always have :-)
My Dad can play anything He picks up and Grandpa could play about 10 different instruments too. They both were in bands---so, what happened to me?????? ~Who knows--lol---I just ~try~ to sing and write :-)