A Little boy cries

Brian, all I can think of when I read this is my Dad and brother. So painful. Beautiful work. Angelique, beautiful work as well.

See I fell in the trap by talking about it period
Why be hateful and mean spirited
I let my emotions get the best of me
And I let him get to me. Letting go
Let god have this one
And karma !!:).

See Raprite how you continue to inspire so many? Thanks!

omy gosh that is so emotional and deep it inspired me

why does mommy cry , why does my daddy lie
when I was a little girl daddy called me his precious pearl
mommy and daddy were happy back then never thought that peace would end
we were a family ,went camping on the weekends
as I grew older, daddy changed he became colder
I would run and hide in my bed under the covers
I could hear mommy screaming and crying
please stop please stop I prayed it would be over.
I cried myself to sleep that night when I awoke
mommy was lying on the couch as she looked up to give me a hug
I seen her eye was black and her lip smeared with blood
daddy was gone, all his things weren't home my daddy was gone
I often thought of what I had done wrong
mommy would just sit and cry all alone
when I asked mommy what was wrong she would just say daddies not coming home, I made friends with a girl in my 8th grade class
we became so close one day she showed me a picture of her new little brother
there was my daddy with her mother, I was so happy I had found him
only to realize he has a new family
I couldn't wait to tell my mother guess what we I found daddy and I have a baby brother, my mother looked at me in shock sat me down and began to talk
she told me daddy left us for a woman across town
daddy lied to me too many times i could see the pain in her eyes
I was still too young to quite understand
the relationships between women and man
i just know that when daddies lie mommies cry.

that was not my life i just imagined this up
my dad is a great MAN in real life
Angelique

I know you said you were going to Nashville and I'm eager to hear about how it's going. Sorry about taking over the rap thing. Can't tell but I have a real passion for it as well as my son and he can actually sing. I , though, know my limitations. I have realized w the recording stuff you can be a bad singer and get away with it to an extent. Lol as long as you don't have to do it live and then you'd have to lipsinc. Lol

Hey Raprite, I'm going to talk to my doctor as he has a good friend in Nashville that writes a couple songs a year and makes his living off those songs. Your a good writer and I promised that I wouldnt get other people jobs because I've been burned many times by those same people but I can't help it. It's who I am. It will be a couple months before I see him but I'm going to try and get the info for both of us because I think you have a real talent and may even like to cowrite because I think between the 2 of us, we could write some damn good stuff. I'd still be careful putting your stuff out there until you have a copy right because they may not use the exact words but formulate a new song based on your ideas basically saying the same thing w different words. I looking into it w an attorney right now as my son and I have started recording.

Hope you don't mind the happy ending.lol , it's what I do.