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    Alleviate
    rjl1969 says (21 Feb '13)

    All you need are the tools
    Cause the skills can you can learn
    Give em the schools
    To make the brains wheels turn
    Don't let them become fools
    Burn it inside out
    Don't question cool
    Turn that question from doubt
    Don't hate
    Don't hesitate
    Or be late
    Find your fate
    Alleviate your fears
    And appreciate
    Set that date
    To graduate
    Mediate
    Do not hate
    And open that gate
    For learning and initiate
    That great debate
    And correlate the lessons in life
    That are great
    And necessitate
    Getting straight
    And making it great for all people of all kinds
    Who can relate
    And free the mind
    Educate,
    And liberate
    Liberate, liberate
    Hey,hey,hey-just Kidding! Rjl1969

    Still working on it.

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on Thu, 02/21/2013 - 8:49pm

All you need are the tools
Cause the skills can you can learn
Give em the schools
To make the brains wheels turn
Don't let them become fools
Burn it inside out
Don't question cool
Turn that question from doubt
Don't hate
Don't hesitate
Or be late
Find your fate
Alleviate your fears
And appreciate
Set that date
To graduate
Mediate
Do not hate
And open that gate
For learning and initiate
That great debate
And correlate the lessons in life
That are great
And necessitate
Getting straight
And making it great for all people of all kinds
Who can relate
And free the mind
Educate,
And liberate
Liberate, liberate
Hey,hey,hey-just Kidding! Rjl1969

Still working on it.

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My second song in the studio. The first one so sucked.

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ah ha. i like that idea. i just throw these out in about 15 min and then play and alter and lookover them a while until the final adjustments come to me then i alter them elsewhere unless typo which is common the i will change on here like are for plural and is for singular. u dont always think of these things while writing that fast.

Montana Anna's picture

You throw this awesome stuff out in about 15 minutes?!?!? WOW! You go, girl! Yeah, I love the process of writing...going back over until just the right words bring about the imagery in my head...ahhh...I love words! :)

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below is the first one that came up with the words to my song. why?

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History of Twisted Brown Trucker and Kid Rock...Timeline of …
www.kidrock.com/forum/history-twisted-brown-trucker-and...tbt-members
All you need is the tools Cause the skills can you can learn Give em the schools To make the brains wheels turn Don't let them become fools Burn it inside out

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how does this unedited version end up on the net when I do a look up for TBT?

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Don't hesitate to speculate and formulate new ideas because its not to late to recreate and I love new ideas to stimulate that side of my brain that can create and make the change to the song because there is no right or wrong . It's what your mind initiates.

ANGELIQUE LACRISSA's picture

dame sound like me g when im having them creative moments
somewhere deep down in my soul
a train roaoring in and out of control
my brains on rant mode
either i wannna change the world let it go
type it out.. share it let it roll
and listening to a great rhyme makes me wanna
like add to it everytime
guess that's how great minds gonna get out and make things happen
believe me i have faith this is a definite gonna
and if i were kid rock i would definently developed a likin!!
of

Montana Anna's picture

Love this! :) I don't know what music or rhythm you hear but I love, love, love where you're going with this! :) ...Wondering if the repeat of "new ideas" can be modified? (something along the lines of ...'Don't hesitate to speculate and formulate new ideas...'cause it's not too late to stimulate...what that side of my brain can create...so make that the change to your song, there is no right or wrong...it's what your mind initiates.') or something like it...thanks, just playing around :)

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I'm still going over them and rewording too. Every time I go back and look at them and reintegrate , investigate, and fix mistakes. Lol. I am editing on notepad and then bringing the edit back here.

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After I wrote it I started reading it and all that came to mind is NXS mediate and I started laughing.

Montana Anna's picture

Classic song...a bit of that was coming through to me, too :) I've been re-reading your lyrics...profound and I need to let them wash over me more. I can feel 'em. I may have a few questions but my brain hasn't formulated them yet :)

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Hahaha, thanks. Makes ya wanna rhyme huh?

Montana Anna's picture

I like it a lot, RJL! I really liked the rhythm and your rhyming :) Keep it up! :)

ANGELIQUE LACRISSA's picture

I can appreciate every thing you sayin
Everything you wrote describes to a tee
How I feel , it comes from a place inside
The human spirit becomes alive
It's time to take that ride that's right
Life's too short ,, we all gonna die
So while we here let's drink us
Some BADASS beer and make the world
A better place starting with a tribe
Ending defending and winning the race.
Kr Shows inspire me to do so much
I live I Milton fl I feel so stuck
I was heartbroken now I don't give a fuck
My mission is to enjoy every second
Raise my son go to school for my real passion
Be Angelique the freak that has a school girl crush on bobby
Gonna see every show I can til I'm 80 crippled and crazy
As long as there's a band ... Then meet a wonderful man please lord
In the future , I love being single but I'm a cohabitant to the bone
I love love can't wait to fall back in it , for now I'm. Closing my eyes and doing me
Damn. I wish I would have bought that book !! Lol
Love your writings keep on rockin!!