There's no reason to work for the man in this wonderful country of ours. Just met with my husbands , now my business partner to go over the details of the new company . He and my spouse ave been working on patents for sometime and he's has quite a few and other ventures and seeing how he has some free time now we decided upon our venture of passive income bringing in about 15 g a day to start. I'm gonna be busy doing the marketing portion since I have all the contacts until it gets going and off the ground and then well, fishing, writing a few songs.
Have some theories about how
Have some theories about how wonderfully some folks can translate immediate rhyme.
The "just write it down" type of rhyme....gut level, where readers find goosebumps going up your arms, and the hair standing up on the back of your neck because YOU SO IDENTIFY with the emotions and situations expressed.
Or the sort that just leaves you shaking your head, that stuff, given the right brain hookup, can help you understand other cultures, dilemmas, and perspectives. Just keep listening....
Wish those so talented (and you know who you are) would use these as an open place to express themselves and be appreciated for the effort.
That was dog not dig. Lol.
That was dog not dig. Lol.
Sorry hadn't had time to get
Sorry hadn't had time to get back on here. Finally got a day off and 1st a dental appointment then to take my dog to the vet to get the ol fixola. Too many puppies and shes getting to old while her playmate Ben is still a young one. By the way I have 3 of the most beautiful ACA registered Jack Russell Terriers for sale but I'm in Fort Worth , Texas. 2 boys and a show dog of a girl name petie girl cause she reminds me of petie on little rascals. All of them are solid white and boys have tricolor split face, ones long hair, one is short and both are stocky w short legs, little girl is petite and gentle. What a beauty. There names are Ace, Duce, and Petie Girl. Anyway I'll have a very busy day today but might try to work on song if I get a chance. Still working on Detroit song and haven't got very far due to time constraints. Up way too early at 330 to bathe my dig for surgery and get ready myself for the dentist. Hit ya up later.
I like it. What about this
I like it. What about this verse,
Shit faced with a case
bout half an ounce of weed
Should be enough
To get me back up to speed
I can't tell you why
Can't tell you when
But I'll be Goddamned
I'm stunk and droned again
This seems to me
A total Win Win
Awesome chorus. You're great.
Awesome chorus. You're great. It goes so well.
So I packed my shit into my
So I packed my shit into my car
Drove down the street and didn't get to far
And what do I see an open bar.
As I walk in to my surprise,
A bounty of weed sold by those special guys.
Here we go again,
My greatest of all sins,
I got stunk and droned again.
We can always change it up.
We can always change it up.
On the front porch I napped,
On the front porch I napped,
While in the house my shit she packed.
I awoke in dread,
I could have slept in my bed.
She noticed the red lipstick on my shirt,
Wasn't really her or my color.
Maybe getting stunk and droned did hurt.
Love it!
Love it!
Sure, I'll help. How's
Sure, I'll help. How's something like this for a chorus,
I can't cope without Dope, Seem to lose without Booze
But I don't give up hope, It's what I choose to do
Drunk as a skunk, stoned to the bone
Damn, Its happened again,
I got stunk and droned
Hey rap rite, I need your
Hey rap rite, I need your help. My husband in his drunkenness one day this weekend came up with the catchy saying, I must have been stunk and droned. I laughed my ass off when I heard what he had said. I knew what he meant but it just didn't come out that way. Anyway I wanted to write a song called I must have been stunk and droned, can't recall the source but how could she not understand, and why do I sleep on the porch. She thinks I'm stunk and droned again but the occifer that followed me home said I was fine then. So what's the problem and why am I cold and alone, surely I'm not stunk and droned. Anyway something like that anyway. Would you like to cowrite?
Hey blue, you'll find a song
Hey blue, you'll find a song that will get you too, then you will start to spew, words like you never knew because there's a writer in all of us including you too!
LOL, not in me. But I surely
LOL, not in me. But I surely enjoy reading your folks stuff.
Awwwwwww!!!!!!! Thank You
Awwwwwww!!!!!!! Thank You ~Rjl :-) You are an AWESOME writer Yourself :-) Thank You :-)
Oh man, talk about real.
Oh man, talk about real. Awesome job rap rite and misbehavin. Kudos. Y'all should cowrite on this one. I love it when a song is real, what life is, or can be. For all these people, who are many, I'm sure, who can relate. That's what music and writing is about. No matter how happy or sad, it's good for it is the real deal. I believe we call it life, with all it's idiosyncrasies good or bad. awesome job to both of you.
Thank You Brian :-) I believe
Thank You Brian :-) I believe also---that all of us have a lyric or two within us :-) Thank You for saying that---coming from a ~Songster like Yourself---I am honored :-)
Thank You :-)
Awesome job, I believe there
Awesome job, I believe there's some song writer in all of us, You just proved it.
Thank You Blue :-)
Thank You Blue :-)
Well done, Donna.
Well done, Donna.
You've inspired me, Brian :-)
You've inspired me, Brian :-) Please accept my humble contribution---here it goes-----
~So I sit here tonight
~With all of my flaws
~Do you ever realize
~All the havoc you've caused?
~Broken dreams and broken bones
~Why couldn't you just go away
~And leave us alone?
~Well, you didn't---
~Just kept harping on
~Filled me with rage---
~Your unfortunate Son.
~Took lessons from You, Dad
~All the things that you taught
~So, now I am ending this legacy--
~With the gun that YOU bought.
I feel it. Sometimes you don
I feel it. Sometimes you don't know them and sometimes it's 24/7. If they are abusive beasts, the pain is the same.